Author's note: I wrote this piece as if i were talking to the people that just signed the Bill of Right, and this is just to thanks them for shaping the country that millions of people made there homes.
Wow I can’t
believe that it’s really you, I can’t believed I am here! Thomas, John,
Patrick, Samuel, it is such a pleasure to meet all of you. This bill that you
just created is the foot hold for the country that will be number one in the
world! This country in my time is the best there is to offer anywhere, because
the freedom, diversity of culture, and the great foundation we stared out with.
The United
States will be in mine and many other the freest country around. You have the
right to believe, and say what you believe it right. The opportunities for not
only men but women also are fantastic. In our country you can really be what
whatever you want to be, unlike in other countries where you have to follow the
family tradition. The options are endless. More and more job are being created
just for people like you and me.
Not only are
we the freest around, we also very diverse. We aren’t all one main culture like
china. The very diverse communities teaches everyone how to get along and live
peacefully with one another. In this amazing country people are allow and
encouraged to believe in what they think is right.
Sure we’re
diverse but that’s nothing compared to the great foundation. If it wasn’t for
our great government and the amendments, people would know what to do or to
believe in. Our government made us organized and the amendment made people feel
at home. Everyone having power in the country makes people feel like they can
do anything, and those are the people that help build up this amazing country.
This well
thought out six page document you all just created is the stepping stool for
this great nation. It will make us the freest and most diverse anywhere. Once
again thanks for making not just mine but millions of peoples homes.
Oh, what a voice you've used here! You've sugar-coated everything...yet I can feel a tremor of sarcasm beneath it.
ReplyDelete"I can't believed I am here"
ReplyDeleteHas few typos here and there. Other than that, pretty solid over all.