Tuesday, October 30, 2012

Patriots Pen


Author's note: I wrote this piece as if i were talking to the people that just signed the Bill of Right, and this is just to thanks them for shaping the country that millions of people made there homes.

Wow I can’t believe that it’s really you, I can’t believed I am here! Thomas, John, Patrick, Samuel, it is such a pleasure to meet all of you. This bill that you just created is the foot hold for the country that will be number one in the world! This country in my time is the best there is to offer anywhere, because the freedom, diversity of culture, and the great foundation we stared out with.

The United States will be in mine and many other the freest country around. You have the right to believe, and say what you believe it right. The opportunities for not only men but women also are fantastic. In our country you can really be what whatever you want to be, unlike in other countries where you have to follow the family tradition. The options are endless. More and more job are being created just for people like you and me.

Not only are we the freest around, we also very diverse. We aren’t all one main culture like china. The very diverse communities teaches everyone how to get along and live peacefully with one another. In this amazing country people are allow and encouraged to believe in what they think is right.

Sure we’re diverse but that’s nothing compared to the great foundation. If it wasn’t for our great government and the amendments, people would know what to do or to believe in. Our government made us organized and the amendment made people feel at home. Everyone having power in the country makes people feel like they can do anything, and those are the people that help build up this amazing country.

This well thought out six page document you all just created is the stepping stool for this great nation. It will make us the freest and most diverse anywhere. Once again thanks for making not just mine but millions of peoples homes.

2 comments:

  1. Oh, what a voice you've used here! You've sugar-coated everything...yet I can feel a tremor of sarcasm beneath it.

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  2. "I can't believed I am here"

    Has few typos here and there. Other than that, pretty solid over all.

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